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Desert Jak

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I put all I've learned about painting and photoshop into this painting. So it's the perfect opportunity for critiques.

As far as technique goes, please let me know what I need to improve on.

Any feedback is welcome.

Thanks!
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

First off, the anatomy of your figure is spot on. The figure is very proportionate, the stance feels natural rather than rigid. I love the colour palette--it's really earthy and calm with just a few splashes of red. The clothing is well done, too. All of the folds and shading look right. The only thing that really doesn't flow in this portrait is the fact that parts of the drawing are outlined in a crisp black line (like the left ear), parts use a softer grey line (like the hands and pants), and others go for a more realistic approach and lose the outline altogether (like the hair and right ear). I think you should pick a method of defining your figure and keep it consistent throughout the work. (Personally, I like the soft outline the best.) Overall, it's a good drawing, but the changing outlines don't make the work feel cohesive, like it all belongs together. From the different outlines I can see that you know a lot about how to work the program you're drawing in and that you are very skilled as a digital artist.